Testimonial from Janet Oakley

Andrew Shattuck McBride has been my editor since his work on my historical novel, Tree Soldier, starting in 2010. Published in 2011, Tree Soldier went on to win two awards including the 2012 EPIC ebook award and the 2013 Grand Prize for fiction from Chanticleer Book Reviews. It was selected as an Everybody Reads for the Palouse and Lewis and Clark Valley communities for 2013. Additionally, it was selected for Bellingham Reads for 2013. Reviews at PW Select and in newspapers have all been positive.

I’m especially appreciative of his work on my latest novel, Timber Rose. Historical fiction can be tricky but Andrew is a thorough and meticulous editor. He not only is excellent on sentence and other copy-editing skills, he is excellent on structure, storytelling flow and details that might bump a reader out of the story. I’m excited about the release of Timber Rose. It’s beautiful from beginning to end.

Janet Oakley, March 19, 2014

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“… we go to poetry for one reason….”

“Let us remember… that in the end we go to poetry for one reason, so that we might more fully inhabit our lives and the world in which we live them, and that if we more fully inhabit these things, we might be less apt to destroy both.” ~ Christian Wiman

Christian Wiman is the Editor of Poetry Magazine. Poetry Magazine was founded by Harriet Monroe in 1912. 100 years! Read more about the magazine here.

[Source: mailing from Poetry Magazine, 2012.]

Subscribe to Poetry Magazine today! Subscribe here.

Blessings to all, Andrew

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Why I Write

I hope that my new poem “Why I Write” inspires writers and poets to write and tell their stories, or to renew their commitment to writing.

I’ve posted my poem on my Writer’s Blog. Read it here. Please follow my Writer’s Blog, too! I’d love to have you along.

If you are a writer, press on with your writing!

Blessings, Andy

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Resources for Writers

Here are some particularly valuable resources for writers:

Creative Writers Opportunities List (CRWROPPS-B) [I prefer CWOL, but that’s just me.] ~ a Yahoo Groups listing for writers of poetry, fiction, and creative nonfiction. This frequent, ongoing list includes calls for submissions, calls for manuscripts, news of contests, and details of open academic positions for writers. See the list here and suscribe!

Poets & Writers Magazine (P&WM) is in my opinion invaluable for poets and writers. The magazine is published six times per year and includes a Master in Fine Arts (MFA) issue and a Creativity and Inspiration issue. Each issue includes wide-ranging information, including an extensive listing of contests, calls for submissions and manuscripts. The classified ads are great, too. View the website here and subscribe. It’s a great investment; if you can’t manage a subscription at this time, take full advantage of the magazine’s website and free online resources!

[The Sept/Oct 2012 issue of P&WM is this year’s MFA issue; it features an interview with Natasha Trethewey, the new Poet Laureate of the United States. There’s a profile of poet, teacher, and mentor Larry Fagin by Porter Fox, one of his students. So much more, too. Don’t miss it!]

“The Writer’s Almanac” ~ if you’re a fan of National Public Radio (NPR) and/or Garrison Keillor, you likely already know about “The Writer’s Almanac.” If you don’t, it’s a rich source of information about writers, literature and history. Each day’s offering includes a poem. There’s a podcast available, and it features Garrison Keillor reading a poem. Visit the website here and subscribe. It’s a great way to begin your writing day!

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“The Universe is made of stories…”

“The Universe is made of stories, not of atoms.”

~ Muriel Rukeyser (December 15, 1913 to February 12, 1980)

Muriel Rukeyser was an American poet, writer, and activist. Source: Wikiquote, here. According to Wikiquote, this line is from her poetry collection “The Speed of Darkness” (1968).

I knew that Muriel Rukeyser was a poet, but not that she was an activist. I’m not surprised, but I do find it fascinating that so many poets have been–or are–activists.

BTW Part 1: Wikiquote! I love Wikiquote! Visit the Main Page of Wikiquote here.

Wikiquote and Wikipedia (Wikiquote’s parent) depend on our writing contributions and our financial contributions. That would be… a hint!

BTW Part 2: Poets.org! I love Poets.org! Read a short bio and sample poems by Muriel Rukeyser here.

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What Constitutes an Excellent Literary Day?

For some hints, read my new blogpost here.

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Testimonial from Jennifer Bullis

Recently, I had the distinct honor of reading/proofreading the manuscript of Impossible Lessons: Poems by Jennifer Bullis, poet and friend. Her chapbook is forthcoming in the Spring of 2013; I am looking forward to Jennifer’s book launch with great anticipation!

I was delighted when Jennifer asked me to proofread her manuscript. Her manuscript’s excellence made it easy for me to proofread and go beyond proofreading to close reading. I enjoyed offering comments and recommendations about a wide range of issues I thought Jennifer might want to consider.

Jennifer is a delight to work with: she is a fine poet, and is thoughtful, perceptive, professional, kind, and–as you can tell from her testimonial (below)–very generous. I love Jennifer’s poems and admire her dedication to her writing even with a very busy family schedule.

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Jennifer sent me this testimonial for my work on her manuscript:

“I am extremely grateful for Andrew S. McBride’s expert help with final revisions to the manuscript for my chapbook, Impossible Lessons: Poems, forthcoming from MoonPath Press in spring 2013. I had edited the manuscript myself over and over, but I knew problems remained that I wasn’t seeing. Andrew caught what I had missed: formatting inconsistencies, need for capitalization changes, and issues with documenting some of the quotations that I use as epigraphs.  He even thought to check the page numbers against those listed in the table of contents.

“Beyond his skilled and attentive proofreading, however, Andrew looked more deeply into the poems, making superb suggestions to sharpen the word choice. The revisions he recommended enhance the imagery and readability in several poems. As well, he proposed revisions to some of the titles, including an outstanding refinement to the title of the collection itself. Finally, he even suggested literary journals to which I might submit certain of the unpublished poems prior to the release of the chapbook.

“Another component of the manuscript Andrew helped me with is the biographical statement. My publisher asked me for an extended bio, and I had been struggling with what types of material to include beyond the brief version I routinely use. Andrew did an extremely thorough job helping me generate content for the long version: he researched my publications, public readings, and board service to provide me with a detailed list of writerly accomplishments to draw from. After he had laid all this groundwork, I found it much easier to select highlights to include in my statement.

“Throughout the process of working on my manuscript, Andrew communicated his observations and recommendations with tact, clarity, professionalism, and kind humor. It has been a delight to work with him, and his contributions to my chapbook manuscript make it a stronger, livelier collection. I enthusiastically recommend not only his editing services, but also his work as a writing coach and adviser, for writers seeking help with any stage of the writing process.

Jennifer Bullis
Bellingham, Washington”

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Are you following Jennifer’s blog? She blogs about “Poetry at the Intersection of Mythology and Hiking.” Jennifer’s recent blog post “Humming Right Along” contains a series of spectacular photographs by her husband Mark. See the photos and read her post here.  Ah, there’s a sneak preview of her chapbook cover photo, too!

Read some of Jennifer’s poems here. Oh, and be on the look out for her “Goddess” poems!

Deep bow and grateful thank you to Jennifer Bullis!

Blessings to all, Andy

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Notes for Aspiring Poets and Writers

1. Write, write, write! You want to write but don’t have the time? Schedule it! Make your writing a personal appointment for yourself, and keep the appointment. (*See note, below.)

2. Establish a regular writing practice. Regularly is essential; daily is ideal. Write new material for at least 15 minutes a day every day. This is fine advice from Priscilla Long in her wonderful book The Writer’s Portable Mentor: A Guide to Art, Craft, and the Writing Life (2010). OR, write 1,000 words a day every day. This is fine advice from Carolyn See in her wonderful and funny book Making a Literary Life: Advice for Writers and Other Dreamers (2002). Additionally, see #1 above.

3. Say in your most authoritative voice, “I am a poet. I am a writer.” Write these statements down on slips of paper and post these around your living spaces (house, apartment, yurt, etc.) where you can see them. Say this statement out loud frequently. (These affirmations will help you make it so.)

4. Read, read, read!

5. Start a “commonplace book”–a bound notebook where you collect your ideas, lines of overheard dialogue, notes on what you’ve read, and passages you like. Pay attention to attribution; take good notes on your sources. This practice will save you lots of time in the long run, and may save you embarrassment at some point.

6.  Start your writer’s “Lexicon”–a bound notebook where you collect your favorite words and phrases. Priscilla Long explains the creation and use of a Lexicon in her fine book The Writer’s Portable Mentor (above). Create a Lexicon which will be for your use: terms and turns of phrase from your childhood, words you like for their sounds and meanings, and words, words, words. Shape your Lexicon, too. In mine, I added sections for “favorite titles,” “favorite sentences,” and “favorite lines.” (When I told Priscilla this, she said “great idea!”) Use your Lexicon book for creating “word traps” or “word salads”–collections of words you’ll be using in your poems and pieces. Return to your Lexicon regularly!

7. Free write regularly–even daily! Use timed-writing exercises as taught by Natalie Goldberg.

8. Subscribe to Poets and Writers Magazine. It is a fine resource for poets and writers, and contains interviews, market listings, calls for submissions, and classifieds. Start with the online PWM here.

9. Subscribe to Creative Writers Opportunities List, a Yahoo community group for poets and writers. CWOL is a handy summary of contests; it includes occasional calls for art and listings for open teaching positions. You can subscribe to and receive regular email updates. Themed contests may give you ideas–even if you don’t enter! View here.

10. Subscribe to a handful of literary magazines–especially the ones you’d like to be published in. Enjoy The Sun? Rattle? The American Poetry Review? Subscribe and support these publishers and editors! My favorite strategy is to enter contests which have an entry fee including a one year subscription (Rattle and The Missouri Review, for example).

11. Attend open mic events. Listen carefully and attentively to other poets and writers. Read your work and listen carefully and attentively to audience feedback. Observe the (unwritten) rules of the open mic venue; for example, stay until the last reader finishes. (Leaving after you’ve read your work is something which is noticed, not to mention rude!) If you liked a particular poem or piece, tell the poet or writer. Network! Oh–there’s NO open mic venue near where you live? Start one!

12. Join a writing group. Oh–there are no writing groups near where you live? Start one! (See where I’m going with this?)

13. Submit your work. Write respectful, professional cover letters. Follow submission guidelines closely. Keep close track of where you have sent your work.

*Note: Write, write, write!

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“…just one that’s mine.” ~ Jack McCarthy

“………
9. Ideas for new poems of my own.
I don’t have to write the first poem
on a given subject, or the best,
just one that’s mine….”

Jack McCarthy, from “The Top Ten Reasons I Take Notes at Poetrynight”

Jack McCarthy is a legendary poet and award-winning slam poet and longtime participant in the poetrynight open mic series in Bellingham, Washington. Read his blog here.

Jack McCarthy is an exceptionally talented poet, and a thoughtful and humorous man. He begins “The Top Ten Reasons I Take Notes at Poetrynight” with “11.”

“The Top Ten Reasons…” appears in as much as we’ve put in, a poetrynight anthology (2012). I am honored to report that I assisted the anthology’s editors Robert Huston and Melissa A. Queen with two proofreads of the manuscript.

If I may say so, as much as we’ve put in is a beautiful book, and features fine work by poets Jack McCarthy, Anna Wolff, Ryler Dustin, Malcolm H. Kenyon, James Bertolino, Buddy Wakefield, Rachel Mehl, Caleb Barber, and many, many others.

ISBN: 978-1-4507-5596-2

Contact poetrynight for your copy of the anthology.

All the best, Andy

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At the Open Mic

This is a repost from my Writer’s Blog.

I wrote my poem “At the open mic” for new poets and new writers, especially any participating in an open microphone event for the first time. I was inspired as I listened to poets and writers reading their poems and telling their stories at open mics at Village Books, Chuckanut Sandstone Writers Theater, and poetrynight over the past two to three years.

Read “At the open mic” here.

As writers, we can read our material at open mics and receive audience feedback and learn about our material. For example, some of the things we learn about a particular piece include whether it’s finished or not.

If a piece happens to fall flat, it may be that we haven’t used the best possible beginning. If audience members laugh when we are not expecting laughter as a response, we learn that there is some humor present in the piece. We can develop this to increase the depth of the piece.

Finally, participation in open mics–as readers and audience members–is an excellent networking opportunity and helps build communities.

There’s no open microphone venue in your community? Start one!

Press on with your writing! Blessings, Andy

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